Hello 5D.
In class today we discussed how to make your writing more interesting and descriptive by adding adjectives, noun modifiers (nouns which function as adjectives), and prepositional phrases.
I want you to modify the following sentences in order to "paint a very clear picture" for your reader. Remember the example we used in class today about lunch.
If you are not in 5D, you DON"T HAVE TO do this, but you are welcome to do it, if you wish.
1. Yesterday, I saw my friend.
2. She is taking a class.
3. My father is a doctor.
4. The class is in a building.
5. It is hot here.
1.Yesterday, i saw my intimated friend in the library.
ReplyDelete2.She is taking a very interesting linguistic class in the corner at the study room.
3.My father is a famous and professional doctor in a cancer hospital.
4.The boring math class is in a old building in main campus.
5. It is extremely hot here in summer.
1. close friend (intimate is not the accurate word)
Deletenice job!
Yesterday, I saw my dearest friend in the Chilis resturant.
ReplyDeleteShe is taking a dreadful math class.
My father is a gorgeous doctor.
The reading class is in the Law Hall building.
It is an unbelievable hot in Houston.
gorgeous means beautiful--a gorgeous woman, a gorgeous sunset, but not a gorgeous doctor (unless you're talking about a woman)
DeleteIt is unbelievably (adverb) hot (adjective) in Houston.
1. Yesterday, I saw my best friend.
ReplyDelete2. She is expecting a baby.
3. My father is a well known doctor.
4. The grammar class is in an old building.
5. Every day is getting hotter here in Houston.