He used to play baseball in the park. His father used to put the whole battele og cologne. He would be imparessed og that. He used to eat while he was playing.
he used to play basketball and he would feel embarrassed when his dad would pick him up from school because everybody smells his cologne and take the whole family with him
He came to the United States when he was 6 years old. His parents are from Iran. He had a normal childhood, he used to play baseball and eat apple pie, or he used played while he was eating.
Everything was perfect until his father would pick him up. He could recognize his father cologne from 50 yards ago. he used to put the whole bottle in his skin, so his father wouldn't be a good burglar.
He would to eat apple pie while he playing baseball He used to be embarrassed when his father come to pick him up middle eastern would never make good burglar would not to be a good burglar because the homeowner would smell us in mid of the night
He would to eat apple pie while he playing baseball He used to be embarrassed when his father come to pick him up middle eastern would never make good burglar would not to be a good burglar because the homeowner would smell us in mid of the night
Maz used to play baseball and eat apple pie when he was a kid. Maze’s father used to pick him from school. He used to smell the cologne for his father from 50 feet when his father would come to pick him up from school.
I heard on the video some things that Maz’s father used to do when he picked him up. The father would pick him up in the car with all the members of the family, even the pet. He would use a big amount of colonne that people could smell him on distance.
Mazz would eat apple pie when he was playing baseball.His father used to wear a lot cologne(Armani). Furthermore his father used to take whole family and rooster when he came to pick mazz up.
He used to play baseball and eat apple pie at the same time with his friends. His father used to pick him up in the car. He used to fell embarrassed because of his father's cologne.
he would feel embarrassed when his father picks him up.He used to play basket ball with his friends.he used to smell the cologne for his father from a far distance.
Maz used to eat an apple pie and he used to play baseball. He even would play baseball while he was eating an apple pie. His father would pick him up in childhood and call him with his Persian accent and that really embarrassed him. His father used to take a whole family in the car(even grandmother, rooster)
He would eat apple pie while he was eating . His father used to pick him up. He used to play baseball. when his father came he used to take his whole family.
when Maz would play baseball with his friends, his father used to take the whole family and the roaster to pick him up from the park .his father used to use a lot of cologne .
Maz moved to the U.S with his family when he was six years old, and he used to play with his new friends. his father used to use a whole cologne that can be smelled from 50 feet when he would come to pick him up from school.
Moz used to playing baseball with American friends to domenstrat that he is an American child, also his father used to put the entire cologne in his body and he mentioned that the midle esteran always putting a lot of cologne
Maz went to America when he was ten years old. He used to play basketball with his friends. His father always picked up him with strong and bad smell cologn. His father also picked all pets with him.He felt so embrassed.
When he was a child, he used to play baseball and eat an apple pie at the same time. He used to play with his friends. He would feel ashamed of his family because his father used to take the whole family to picked him in the park.
He is an immigrant child who would play basketball and eat apple pie. Interestingly, he would eat apple pie while he played basketball. Furthermore, he would play with his friends Sam, Brad, and Jessie in the playground. They did not know where was Maz from until his father would come by and pick him up with his entire family which were fifty people in one car.
He used to play baseball and eat apple pie at the same time .;D
ReplyDeletehe used to be embarrassed of his family.
Correct.
DeleteHe used to play baseball in the park. His father used to put the whole battele og cologne. He would be imparessed og that. He used to eat while he was playing.
ReplyDeleteCorrect grammar. Incorrect spelling ;)
Deletehe used to play basketball and he would feel embarrassed when his dad would pick him up from school because everybody smells his cologne and take the whole family with him
ReplyDeleteBaseball, not basketball!
Delete...because everybody WOULD SMELL his cologne and he WOULD TAKE the whole family with him.
He came to the United States when he was 6 years old. His parents are from Iran. He had a normal childhood, he used to play baseball and eat apple pie, or he used played while he was eating.
ReplyDeleteEverything was perfect until his father would pick him up. He could recognize his father cologne from 50 yards ago. he used to put the whole bottle in his skin, so his father wouldn't be a good burglar.
...or he used played while he was eating? USED PLAYED?
Deletefrom 50 yards AWAY.
The rest of your grammar is correct.
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ReplyDeleteHe would to eat apple pie while he playing baseball
DeleteHe used to be embarrassed when his father come to pick him up
middle eastern would never make good burglar would not to be a good burglar because the homeowner would smell us in mid of the night
He would to eat apple pie while he playing baseball
DeleteHe used to be embarrassed when his father come to pick him up
middle eastern would never make good burglar would not to be a good burglar because the homeowner would smell us in mid of the night
He would to eat apple pie while he playing baseball.
DeletePLEASE TRY THIS SENTENCE AGAIN!
...when his father come to pick him up.
PLEASE TRY THIS PART AGAIN!
third sentence is good if you remove "would not to be a good burglar"
Maz used to play baseball and eat apple pie when he was a kid.
ReplyDeleteMaze’s father used to pick him from school.
He used to smell the cologne for his father from 50 feet when his father would come to pick him up from school.
Grammar is correct.
Deletewhen Maz was a kid, he used to play basket ball with his friend. he would enjoy hanging out with his friend until his father would pick him up.
ReplyDeleteGrammar is correct, but he played BASEBALL!
DeleteI heard on the video some things that Maz’s father used to do when he picked him up. The father would pick him up in the car with all the members of the family, even the pet. He would use a big amount of colonne that people could smell him on distance.
ReplyDeleteGrammar is correct.
Deletea lot of cologne (not "a big amount")
He used to see a car with his whole family and rooster.
ReplyDeleteHis father used to say to me in persian accent.
His father used to come with the car filled with his whole family and the rooster (the rooster was just a joke; there really wasn't a rooster).
DeleteHis father used to call to HIM (not you) in a thick Persian accent.
He used to be embarrassed when his dad picked up him at the school
ReplyDeleteCorrect.
DeleteMazz would eat apple pie when he was playing baseball.His father used to wear a lot cologne(Armani). Furthermore his father used to take whole family and rooster when he came to pick mazz up.
ReplyDeleteWHILE he was playing baseball.
Delete...when he WOULD COME to pick Maz up.
He ate apple pie while he was playing baseball with his friends
ReplyDeleteHe WOULD EAT... (past habit)
DeleteHe used to play baseball and eat apple pie at the same time with his friends. His father used to pick him up in the car. He used to fell embarrassed because of his father's cologne.
ReplyDeletehe would feel embarrassed when his father picks him up.He used to play basket ball with his friends.he used to smell the cologne for his father from a far distance.
ReplyDelete...when his father WOULD pick him up.
DeleteBASEBALL!!!
He used to eat apple pie while playing baseball.
ReplyDeleteHe used to play bastball with his friends at the park.
His father used to pick him up in the car with all of his family members.
Correct.
Deletehe used to eat apple pie while he was playing baseball. He would enjoy playing with his friends. His father used to take whole family in the car.
ReplyDeleteMaz used to eat an apple pie and he used to play baseball. He even would play baseball while he was eating an apple pie. His father would pick him up in childhood and call him with his Persian accent and that really embarrassed him. His father used to take a whole family in the car(even grandmother, rooster)
ReplyDeleteGrammar is correct.
DeleteHe would eat apple pie while he was eating .
ReplyDeleteHis father used to pick him up.
He used to play baseball.
when his father came he used to take his whole family.
He would eat apple pie while he was eating???
DeleteThe grammar is correct ;D
when Maz would play baseball with his friends, his father used to take the whole family and the roaster to pick him up from the park .his father used to use a lot of cologne .
ReplyDeleteCorrect.
DeleteMaz moved to the U.S with his family when he was six years old, and he used to play with his new friends.
ReplyDeletehis father used to use a whole cologne that can be smelled from 50 feet when he would come to pick him up from school.
that COULD be smelled...
DeleteUsed to/would is correct.
Moz used to playing baseball with American friends to domenstrat that he is an American child, also his father used to put the entire cologne in his body and he mentioned that the midle esteran always putting a lot of cologne
ReplyDeleteUsed to playing?
DeleteMiddle Eastern always PUT on a lot of cologne (habit--simple present).
Maz would play baseball.
ReplyDeleteMaz used to eat an apple pie when he played baseball.
Maz used to feel embarrassed when his father picked him up.
2. WHILE he played baseball.
DeleteMaz went to America when he was ten years old. He used to play basketball with his friends. His father always picked up him with strong and bad smell cologn. His father also picked all pets with him.He felt so embrassed.
ReplyDeleteBASEBALL!!!
DeleteI only see "used to" once and I don't see "would."
Please try again!
When he was a kid, he was always playing baseball while he was eating apple pie.
ReplyDeleteHis father would like to pick up him from school with the the whole big family
1. ... he used to/would play baseball
DeleteWhen he was a child, he used to play baseball and eat an apple pie at the same time. He used to play with his friends. He would feel ashamed of his family because his father used to take the whole family to picked him in the park.
ReplyDeleteGrammar is correct.
Delete(to pick him up at the park)
He is an immigrant child who would play basketball and eat apple pie. Interestingly, he would eat apple pie while he played basketball. Furthermore, he would play with his friends Sam, Brad, and Jessie in the playground. They did not know where was Maz from until his father would come by and pick him up with his entire family which were fifty people in one car.
ReplyDeleteUsed to and would are used correctly.
DeleteBASEBALL!!!