It was a strange story because before the weeding day, they had never met. He just put an advertising on internet that he wanted to marry with someone. He created an application form and told to his family to interview some candidates and select one of them. And that's it! the winner was Runze. Weinlick and Runze just met at the same day of the wedding.. Runze said that it had been the best day that she had in her life. Also to Weinlick because she had all the qualities that he wait in a woman.
Weinlick had become crazy about the question that when he was going to tie the knot. As a result, he decided to pick a date out of the blue, and as this date was getting closer,he advertised for a bride on the internet on the Committee website to make a democratic selection. His sister helped him look for a special person who had not met Weinlick before. Both them were very nervous and excited, because they had not never experienced it. Finally, they were taken to the Mall of America in Minneapolis to celebrate.
The story began when Weinlick decided to marry in a strange way. His friend Steve Fletcher gave him the idea that marriage through the Internet. He accepted it and he advertised it on the Internet. He did the application for that and then, he asked some friends to choose the winner. the winner was Runze and she hadn't known him befor she met him. The wedding day happened at the Mall of America and the majority shoppers attended this event.
1. to get married (more common that "to marry") 2. the idea ABOUT marriage 3. After filling out the application, he asked some friends... 4. The winner was Runze, who hadn't known him UNTIL she met him.
Before the weeding day they had never met. It was a kind of madness, the friends and relatives of David Weinlick select his wife. It started when Davis' friends had the genial idea to select the wife thorough a democratic selection process. David liked the idea and he created an application to interview the candidates. Weinlinck's friends and relative would be the responsible to choose the right girl who was Elizabeth Runze. Weinlick loved the selection and was happy.
Weinlick got tired of his friends questions about when he was going to tie the knot. So his friend came up with the idea of advertising for a bride on a committee website. At the first he wasn't sure about the idea but he wanted to get married. The winner was Runze.
Davied Weinlick had done something that people wouldn't even thought about it in America.he wanted to marry ,but he didn't find the wife yet. Therefore, he allowed his family and friends to find him a wife. Moreover,he had picked the day for wedding without the women yet. In addition, he had made an application form for his friends and relatives asking them to look up for a wife to be his. They had taken this request pretty serious , and they had helped him.Finally, Elizabeth Runze was the winner of the election.
Runze and Weinlick had never met before they got married. Weinlick had long pondering marriage and had known for sometimes that he was going to get married in June of 1998. Even though he already knew who would be invited, he didn't know whom he would be marrying.Therefore, his friend " Steve Fletcher " came up with an idea of a democratic selection process and he liked it. He had created An application Form in internet website called " Bridal Nomination Committee. his friends and relatives tokk it seriously.
It's a new way to get married these days, now a days you can do what ever you want on the internet like what he did. he posted that he want to get married and he found what he looking for. so, we might have a new ways to marriage in the near future. but, one thing to add that this married you don't know any thing about the girl until you marrie her.
Weinlick had wanted to get married but he didn't know whom he would be marrying. The bride and the groom had never met before the election. On the day of candidates, a woman called Runze had been chosen as the bride and Runze said that the day was the most incredible she had ever experienced. At last, they celebrated the wedding in a mall and there were about 2000 shoppers looked on.
Weinlick was planning to get married.He asked his family and friends to help him find the bride after that he choosed the date of the widding before he know whom he will be married to.His friend Steve Fletcher suggested the democratic selection and he liked that suggestion and he posted an announcement on Bridal Nomination Committee wbsite . He was creating an application by his own to ask his family and friends to interview the competitors and select one of them . they were interviewing them on the party before the widding ceremony after that they choosed Elizabeth Runze then they had the plan which they were planing to do .
David Weinlick married a girl he has never met.he just knew the marriage time but he didn't know the bride his friend suggested an unusual idea which is to make the relatives and friends choose his future wife. he selected a specific time for the marriage and finally they chose Elizabeth, they have never met in the past but they got married
It's an unusual story of a guy who got tired of the same question, "When are you going to marry?." He choose a date, but he hadn't the bride. One of his friends came up whit the idea of a democratic selection. He liked the idea and he advertised for a bride on a Bridal Nomination Committe website. He let all his friends and family choose a bride for him. They did an interview the day before the wedding, something very unusual. They found the right girl, and after all they married in a mall in Minneapolis. The most important was that he was very happy, and his bride too.
Samantha and Yang had unusual desire they want unconventional marriage .they married in the air, between the ground and the sky, it is not safe and they hardly found minister to marry them.
Weinlick tired of being asked when he was going to get married,so he picked up randomly date June13,1998.Weinlick's friend steven came up with a pretty innovative solution"Democratic selection process". Weinlick's friends and family started to select Mrs.Weinlick through the applications form they received,then interviewed the candidates,Elzabeth won the election.Soon Elzabeth and David exchanged vows at the mall of America, about 2.000 shoppers lined to watch them.
By the time Weinlick didn't know his wife , He had prepared for his wedding ,selected the day,and invited guests His friend gave him a creative idea by creating an application on the website .in addition , he asked his relatives, friend to choice the winner Then the winner was elizabeth who was a pharmacy student and she hadn't known him before Their wedding was at the mall of americans
It began with his friends' question when he was going to tie the knot. This question had repeated in his mind before he let his friends and family help him to figure out this question. The date out of blue, 28, had been chosen before his friend came up with the idea of a democratic selection. Many of candidates have been interviewed for a spacial one who can fit into his family. Eventually, it was Runze who won this competition. Moreover, more than 11 years after they have married, they are the parents of four children.
It was a strange story because before the weeding day, they had never met. He just put an advertising on internet that he wanted to marry with someone. He created an application form and told to his family to interview some candidates and select one of them. And that's it! the winner was Runze. Weinlick and Runze just met at the same day of the wedding.. Runze said that it had been the best day that she had in her life. Also to Weinlick because she had all the qualities that he wait in a woman.
ReplyDeleteShe said that it WAS the best day that she HAD HAD in her life.
DeleteAlso for Weinlick because she had all the qualities that he HAD WAITED for in a woman.
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ReplyDeleteWeinlick HAD WANTED to get married (before he actually got married).
DeleteThe bride and the groom had never met before the "election."
Your other sentences look good.
Weinlick had become crazy about the question that when he was going to tie the knot. As a result, he decided to pick a date out of the blue, and as this date was getting closer,he advertised for a bride on the internet on the Committee website to make a democratic selection. His sister helped him look for a special person who had not met Weinlick before. Both them were very nervous and excited, because they had not never experienced it. Finally, they were taken to the Mall of America in Minneapolis to celebrate.
ReplyDeleteThis is generally clear and correct. I like your use of the idioms from the reading.
Delete1. the question OF (not that)
2. Both OF them
3. they had not EVER BEEN MARRIED before.
The story began when Weinlick decided to marry in a strange way. His friend Steve Fletcher gave him the idea that marriage through the Internet. He accepted it and he advertised it on the Internet. He did the application for that and then, he asked some friends to choose the winner. the winner was Runze and she hadn't known him befor she met him. The wedding day happened at the Mall of America and the majority shoppers attended this event.
ReplyDelete1. to get married (more common that "to marry")
Delete2. the idea ABOUT marriage
3. After filling out the application, he asked some friends...
4. The winner was Runze, who hadn't known him UNTIL she met him.
Before the weeding day they had never met. It was a kind of madness, the friends and relatives of David Weinlick select his wife. It started when Davis' friends had the genial idea to select the wife thorough a democratic selection process. David liked the idea and he created an application to interview the candidates. Weinlinck's friends and relative would be the responsible to choose the right girl who was Elizabeth Runze. Weinlick loved the selection and was happy.
ReplyDelete1. select or selected?
Delete2. David liked the idea, SO he created...
3. ...to choose the right girl. Elizabeth Runze was the winner.
Weinlick got tired of his friends questions about when he was going to tie the knot. So his friend came up with the idea of advertising for a bride on a committee website. At the first he wasn't sure about the idea but he wanted to get married. The winner was Runze.
ReplyDeleteWriting is very clear.
Delete1. At first (not at the first)
2. Can you say more?
Davied Weinlick had done something that people wouldn't even thought about it in America.he wanted to marry ,but he didn't find the wife yet. Therefore, he allowed his family and friends to find him a wife. Moreover,he had picked the day for wedding without the women yet. In addition, he had made an application form for his friends and relatives asking them to look up for a wife to be his. They had taken this request pretty serious , and they had helped him.Finally, Elizabeth Runze was the winner of the election.
ReplyDeleteRunze and Weinlick had never met before they got married. Weinlick had long pondering marriage and had known for sometimes that he was going to get married in June of 1998. Even though he already knew who would be invited, he didn't know whom he would be marrying.Therefore, his friend " Steve Fletcher " came up with an idea of a democratic selection process and he liked it. He had created An application Form in internet website called " Bridal Nomination Committee. his friends and relatives tokk it seriously.
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ReplyDeleteIt's a new way to get married these days, now a days you can do what ever you want on the internet like what he did. he posted that he want to get married and he found what he looking for. so, we might have a new ways to marriage in the near future. but, one thing to add that this married you don't know any thing about the girl until you marrie her.
Weinlick had wanted to get married but he didn't know whom he would be marrying. The bride and the groom had never met before the election. On the day of candidates, a woman called Runze had been chosen as the bride and Runze said that the day was the most incredible she had ever experienced. At last, they celebrated the wedding in a mall and there were about 2000 shoppers looked on.
ReplyDeleteWeinlick was planning to get married.He asked his family and friends to help him find the bride after that he choosed the date of the widding before he know whom he will be married to.His friend Steve Fletcher suggested the democratic selection and he liked that suggestion and he posted an announcement on Bridal Nomination Committee wbsite . He was creating an application by his own to ask his family and friends to interview the competitors and select one of them . they were interviewing them on the party before the widding ceremony after that they choosed Elizabeth Runze then they had the plan which they were planing to do .
ReplyDeleteThey were to saperated people and they got married unusually by Bridal Nomination Committee website.
ReplyDeleteDavid Weinlick married a girl he has never met.he just knew the marriage time but he didn't know the bride his friend suggested an unusual idea which is to make the relatives and friends choose his future wife. he selected a specific time for the marriage and finally they chose Elizabeth, they have never met in the past but they got married
ReplyDeleteIt's an unusual story of a guy who got tired of the same question, "When are you going to marry?." He choose a date, but he hadn't the bride. One of his friends came up whit the idea of a democratic selection. He liked the idea and he advertised for a bride on a Bridal Nomination Committe website. He let all his friends and family choose a bride for him. They did an interview the day before the wedding, something very unusual. They found the right girl, and after all they married in a mall in Minneapolis. The most important was that he was very happy, and his bride too.
ReplyDeleteSamantha and Yang had unusual desire they want unconventional marriage .they married in the air, between the ground and the sky, it is not safe and they hardly found minister to marry them.
ReplyDeleteWeinlick tired of being asked when he was going to get married,so he picked up randomly date June13,1998.Weinlick's friend steven came up with a pretty innovative solution"Democratic selection process". Weinlick's friends and family started to select Mrs.Weinlick through the applications form they received,then interviewed the candidates,Elzabeth won the election.Soon Elzabeth and David exchanged vows at the mall of America, about 2.000 shoppers lined to watch them.
ReplyDeleteBy the time Weinlick didn't know his wife ,
ReplyDeleteHe had prepared for his wedding ,selected the day,and invited guests
His friend gave him a creative idea by creating an application on the website .in addition , he asked his relatives, friend to choice the winner
Then the winner was elizabeth who was a pharmacy student and she hadn't known him before
Their wedding was at the mall of americans
It began with his friends' question when he was going to tie the knot. This question had repeated in his mind before he let his friends and family help him to figure out this question. The date out of blue, 28, had been chosen before his friend came up with the idea of a democratic selection. Many of candidates have been interviewed for a spacial one who can fit into his family. Eventually, it was Runze who won this competition. Moreover, more than 11 years after they have married, they are the parents of four children.
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