This weekend I went to Galveston mith my uncle and his wife. We had a really good time there, but as a result of my trip to Galveston I couldn't play golf, and that was what I wanted to do on my weekend.
My weekend was a little boring because I did some routines things that I do on the week. I just clean my apartment, I went to the supermarket because on the week I couldn't go, I studied for my test and see some series like "Two and A Half Men" to distract my mind. I would liked to ride bike at the Woodlands or maybe ride kayak, something like that.
My weekend was a little boring because I did some routines things that I do during the week. I just cleaned my apartment, I went to the supermarket because on the week I couldn't go, I studied for my test and saw some series like "Two and A Half Men" to distract my mind. I would liked to handled bike at the Woodlands or maybe kayak, something like that.
Last weekend, I just stayed in my room and had relax with my kitten. My girlfriend went to Las Vegas at Thursday night and I really want to go with her but I didn't. I stayed in my small room and watched some movies. I watched "The Reader," which I've watched before but I hadn't finish it, so I watched it again and finished it. It is really a fantastic movie and let me had a deep think about it. My girlfriend came back last night and she was hungry, asked me to make some food for her, I did, and she just left the bowls in the sink. Then I told my roommate, when you saw some bowls in the sink, it shows my girlfriend has came back.
1. had relax? 2. on Thursday night (not "at") 3. want or wanted? 4. hadn't finish or hadn't finished? 5. let me had a deep think (it made me think deeply) 6. Last sentence has two mistakes. Please try again!
This weekend I slept over at my friend's house. I also went to the Galleria and did lots of shopping. Of course I wasted half of my money there . I had wanted to see a movie but there was no time so I couldn't .
this weekend i didn't do anything special.Eventhogh my uncle came from san antonio and stayed all weekend with us i didn't see him untill sunday.After that we went to see the new movie(now you see me)
This weekend was very dynamic for me. On Saturday I woke up very early because I had a big party that night, so at 7:30 am began my day. First, I made the breakfast too fast, second I did some laundry and then I prepared to left my home. Obviously I had to go to salon beauty, in Houston my hair is disaster and it is impossible for me make a good stylish. After, I needed a manicure and a pedicure so I went to Randalls. At that time, 2:00 pm the hungry was killing me, so I went to Sweet Tomatoes. I arrived to my home at 6:30 pm, and
1. my day began (not began my day) S-V 2. prepared to left? 3. beauty salon (not salon beauty) 4. a good style (not stylish) 5. You went to Randalls for a manicure and pedicure??? 6. hunger (not hungry) 7. arrived at (not to) 8. and? where is the rest of the story???
This weekend was very dynamic for me. On Saturday I woke up very early because I had a big party that night, so at 7:30 am my day began. First, I made the breakfast too fast, second I did some laundry and then I prepared me to leave my home. Obviously I had to go to beauty salon, in Houston my hair is disaster and it is impossible for me make a good style. After, I needed a manicure and a pedicure so I went to Randalls. At that time 2:00 pm the hunger was killing me, so I went to Sweet Tomatoes. I arrived at my home at 6:30 pm, and...
Last weekend, I went to San Antonio with my friend. It was 11pm already when we got there. We spent a lot of time on finding an available suits and hotel. We did not have a good rest until midnight. We were too tired to keep searching for hotel. Especially, it was so dangerous for us to go alone outside at night. Second day, we visited the famous site of "Alamo" and river walk. we had a good weekend. However, I should have reviewed my book on weekend.
This weekend I went to Galveston mith my uncle and his wife. We had a really good time there, but as a result of my trip to Galveston I couldn't play golf, and that was what I wanted to do on my weekend.
ReplyDeleteI'm sorry that you didn't get to play golf this weekend, but I'm happy to see that your grammar is correct and your writing is clear :D
DeleteMy weekend was a little boring because I did some routines things that I do on the week. I just clean my apartment, I went to the supermarket because on the week I couldn't go, I studied for my test and see some series like "Two and A Half Men" to distract my mind. I would liked to ride bike at the Woodlands or maybe ride kayak, something like that.
ReplyDelete1. during the week (not "on" the week)
Delete2. clean or cleaned?
3. see or saw?
4. Last sentence is incorrect. Please try again!
I would liked to have handled bike or kayak, something like that. Is that ok?
DeleteMy weekend was a little boring because I did some routines things that I do during the week. I just cleaned my apartment, I went to the supermarket because on the week I couldn't go, I studied for my test and saw some series like "Two and A Half Men" to distract my mind. I would liked to handled bike at the Woodlands or maybe kayak, something like that.
DeleteYou would have liked to have gone bike riding or perhaps kayaking... (this sentence is VERY ADVANCED grammar).
DeleteI made I mistake, it was "saw" instead "see"
ReplyDeleteyou are right.
DeleteLast weekend, I just stayed in my room and had relax with my kitten. My girlfriend went to Las Vegas at Thursday night and I really want to go with her but I didn't. I stayed in my small room and watched some movies. I watched "The Reader," which I've watched before but I hadn't finish it, so I watched it again and finished it. It is really a fantastic movie and let me had a deep think about it. My girlfriend came back last night and she was hungry, asked me to make some food for her, I did, and she just left the bowls in the sink. Then I told my roommate, when you saw some bowls in the sink, it shows my girlfriend has came back.
ReplyDelete1. had relax?
Delete2. on Thursday night (not "at")
3. want or wanted?
4. hadn't finish or hadn't finished?
5. let me had a deep think (it made me think deeply)
6. Last sentence has two mistakes. Please try again!
This weekend I slept over at my friend's house. I also went to the Galleria and did lots of shopping. Of course I wasted half of my money there . I had wanted to see a movie but there was no time so I couldn't .
ReplyDeleteYour writing is clear :D
Deletethis weekend i didn't do anything special.Eventhogh my uncle came from san antonio and stayed all weekend with us i didn't see him untill sunday.After that we went to see the new movie(now you see me)
ReplyDeleteYour writing is clear. For titles of books or movies, you have to capitalize (Now You See Me).
DeleteI went with my sons to Chucky Cheese and we had a fun together. Actually, I remembered moments that I had spent there when I was a child.
ReplyDeleteWriting is clear. Past perfect is correct.
DeleteYou were there when you were a child? Did you grow up here in the US?
This weekend was very dynamic for me. On Saturday I woke up very early because I had a big party that night, so at 7:30 am began my day. First, I made the breakfast too fast, second I did some laundry and then I prepared to left my home. Obviously I had to go to salon beauty, in Houston my hair is disaster and it is impossible for me make a good stylish. After, I needed a manicure and a pedicure so I went to Randalls. At that time, 2:00 pm the hungry was killing me, so I went to Sweet Tomatoes. I arrived to my home at 6:30 pm, and
ReplyDelete1. my day began (not began my day) S-V
Delete2. prepared to left?
3. beauty salon (not salon beauty)
4. a good style (not stylish)
5. You went to Randalls for a manicure and pedicure???
6. hunger (not hungry)
7. arrived at (not to)
8. and? where is the rest of the story???
This weekend was very dynamic for me. On Saturday I woke up very early because I had a big party that night, so at 7:30 am my day began. First, I made the breakfast too fast, second I did some laundry and then I prepared me to leave my home. Obviously I had to go to beauty salon, in Houston my hair is disaster and it is impossible for me make a good style. After, I needed a manicure and a pedicure so I went to Randalls. At that time 2:00 pm the hunger was killing me, so I went to Sweet Tomatoes. I arrived at my home at 6:30 pm, and...
ReplyDeleteA manicure and a pedicure at Randalls? I still don't get it!
DeleteLast weekend, I went to San Antonio with my friend. It was 11pm already when we got there. We spent a lot of time on finding an available suits and hotel. We did not have a good rest until midnight. We were too tired to keep searching for hotel. Especially, it was so dangerous for us to go alone outside at night. Second day, we visited the famous site of "Alamo" and river walk. we had a good weekend. However, I should have reviewed my book on weekend.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad to hear that you have ventured outside of Houston :D
DeleteI had a nice weekend ever, i spent it with tow of my classmates " Dohian and Fiasal ". We went to theater and we watched " Hang Over ".
ReplyDeleteYou had a nice weekend ever? What does that mean?
DeleteTell me what did you not do that you had wanted to do?